Finished the first edit of my work in progress

It’s been the most unusual book I’ve written. It started with a casual, playful sentence while I was sitting at the computer. And then, without my planning to, a character appeared on my screen. It was almost as if she had been waiting for me to discover her. She was insistent and beguiling. I started writing without the least idea of what would happen. Now the book is complete and I have done my first edit. I’ll tinker with the order of scenes (one of the advantages and maybe disadvantages of writing the novel on Scrivener is that I can do this with ease, perhaps too much ease.)

Some commentators who like to criticise Indie writers complain that their books are not properly edited. Believe me, mine will be, as are most Indie novels nowadays. The odd typo may still remain un-spotted but the book will go through several scrutinies so I hope they will be very few and far between. Amazon Kindle even does a spell-check when you upload your book so there are a multiplicity of gate-keepers.

Because of the lengthy editing process I’m not sure when the book will be published but it will be some time in the New Year.

In the meanwhile, here’s how Alice introduced herself.Alice


To be a servant at the court of King Henry is to live with your heart in your mouth. This is so whether you are young or old, male or female. I am young and I am female. So the danger to me is considerable.

The danger is the more acute because I am pretty and the Queen is in the last month of her confinement.

Henry has divorced one wife and executed the second. But that is far from the whole story. A string of shattered hearts lies across the land like a pearl necklace broken in rage. Aye, it’s true that complicit fathers, brothers, uncles and even husbands have got rich by leading their women like heifers to the courtly market. It is the women who give the most and suffer the most grievously.

Unless of course, they are clever.

It does not do to be too clever. Anne Boleyn taught us this. For make no mistake, King Henry is more clever than any man in the kingdom now that Thomas Wolsey is dead. And he is as subtle and wily as even the most cunning of women. Boleyn’s head rolling from the block is testimony to that.

The trick is to show your cleverness to just such a degree that Henry is intrigued by it but not threatened. The second trick is to intimate that your cleverness is at his disposal and command even more than your own. And the third trick? Ah, the third trick is to be willing to bed the great beast of appetites and to know when to do it.

My name is Alice Petherton and I am nineteen years of age. I came to court as a simple servant but I caught the eye of Anne Boleyn when she was newly crowned. I was good at singing, could dance like an elf and made her laugh and think. She took me as one of her maids of honour and my slow approach to the furnace began.

I was fond of Anne Boleyn. She was not pretty but there was something alluring about her, some promise of carnality which affected all who knew her, King and subject, man and woman. I must confess that on more than one night I awoke hot with sweat having dreamed I had been bedded by the Queen, worn out and used by her, alive and half-deadened, exultant and dismayed.

There came one morning when she stroked my cheek and kissed me swiftly on the lips. I gazed into her eyes that day, telling her that I was willing. But she merely laughed and commanded me to get on with my sewing. So are we played with by those we must learn to call our betters.

I will become one of these betters, I determined, I will be fawned upon and bowed to some day.

Not that I aspire to be a queen, you must understand. That is too deadly by far. King Henry appears to be in love with Jane Seymour. He would, of course, for she carries his child. His greatest lust is for a male successor; even more than for any pretty face and shapely form. There is no sense in seeking to usurp Seymour’s place as Queen; no hope. If she proves to be a good brood mare he will rest content for a little while. But in the meanwhile he hungers. The furnace grows hotter by the hour.

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About Martin Lake

Martin Lake lives in the French Riviera with his wife. After studying at the University of East Anglia he worked as a teacher, trainer and company director. A serious accident shattered his arm and meant that he had to rein back his work. He decided to concentrate on writing and is now writing full-time. He writes a wide range of fiction. His main interests are historical fiction, short stories and fiction for young adults. Martin has a series of novels 'The Lost King' which are set in the years following the Norman Invasion of England. They concern Edgar Atheling, last representative of the ancient English royal dynasty and his fight to regain the throne from William the Conqueror. Martin has also published 'Artful' the further adventures of the Dodger and 'Outcasts' a novel about fall of the Crusader Kingdom of Jerusalem. His latest novel, 'A Love Most Dangerous' is about a maid of honour who becomes the lover of Henry VIII. Martin’s work has been broadcast on radio. He won first prize in the Kenneth Grahame Society competition to write a story based on 'The Wind in the Willows.' You can get the collection, 'The Wind in the Willows Short Stories' from Amazon.
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8 Responses to Finished the first edit of my work in progress

  1. I’ve noticed quite a few typos in recent novels from the big publishers so I think the odd one in an indie book is quite acceptable! 🙂

  2. Waiting eagerly to meet Alice 🙂

  3. Congrats on the first edit. How many to go?

  4. tigers68 says:

    well done Martin….looking forward to the finished product 🙂

    • Martin Lake says:

      The trouble is that I’m eager to start something else but know I must finish editing Alice first. And then I have to get a title and work with a designer on the cover.

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