The Start of a Life-Long Friendship. #SampleSunday #HistNov

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I was awake long before dawn on the appointed day.  I pushed Rip’s head off my chest and leapt out of bed.  ‘We are going to fight the Normans,’ I told him as I struggled into my clothes.  He yawned loudly.  I had told him this twelve dozen times already.  ‘I am the King of England,’ I told him, ‘and I lead my host to battle.’  He yawned and scratched at his ear.  ‘To battle,’ I cried, ‘to battle.’  He sprang up at my cry, first among champions, tail wagging furiously.  I led the charge down to breakfast.

I was hungry but could hardly swallow my bread and cheese so took them with me as I stepped out into the cold air.  It was still black night and stars glittered above my head.  I turned to the east but there was no sign of the sun.  Above the horizon a clear white star shone bright.

‘The morning star,’ said a voice.  ‘A good omen.’  The familiar shape of Oswald emerged and placed a hand upon my shoulder.  There was a second figure beside him, but not a tall warrior.  He came close and I saw that it was a boy of about my age, although taller and broader.

‘This is my son, Godwin,’ said Oswald.  I nodded at the boy and he nodded back.

‘I thought he would be a good companion for you,’ continued Oswald.  ‘But mind you keep yourselves out of trouble.  The army will march swiftly and I won’t have time to look out for both of you.  Be ready to ride at dawn.’

Oswald nodded and strode off in the night.  I stared in silence at Godwin for a little and he stared at me.  Finally he spoke.

‘Are you really the King of England?’

‘Yes.’

‘So I am your subject?’

‘Yes.’

There was a long silence between us.

‘But we can still be friends,’ I said at last.

Godwin nodded.  ‘I’m glad.  Herrig was my friend but he died of a fever.  He coughed up blood and a lump of black matter as big as an egg.  Then he died.’

‘Perhaps it was his soul,’ I said.  ‘The black matter.’

‘Or maybe the imp that was causing the fever,’ said Godwin.  He paused, as if realising that he had contradicted me.  ‘On account of it being black,’ he explained, quickly.

I did not answer for a moment.  I did not know what a king should do when he was contradicted by one of his subjects.  Should I insist it was a soul, even though I believed that Godwin’s idea was more likely?  Would he take it as a sign of weakness if I changed my mind?  What would Harold have done, I wondered?

‘I think you are probably right,’ I said finally.  ‘If it were black then it was more likely to be an imp than his soul.’  I paused.  ‘Unless, of course, Herrig was really evil.’

I heard Godwin say ‘hmm’ thoughtfully and I smiled.  ‘I don’t think he was that evil,’ he said at last.

‘So it must have been an imp,’ I decided.

I saw Godwin nod in the first glimmer of morning.

‘Let’s visit the horses,’ I said.

Godwin and I helped a groom saddle up my pony.  Godwin did not have a pony but I ordered that the grooms find him one.  This greatly impressed him.  By the time we had mounted the dawn had come, cold and clear, with a streak of red where the sun would appear.  My heart began to hammer in my chest and my head swam.  By this time several of my guards had joined us and they looked searchingly at me.  Could they hear the pounding of my heart, I wondered?  Would they think that I was a coward?  I tried to think of anything other than the coming battle but no other thoughts would stick in my mind.  I looked at Godwin.  He seemed as excited as I was.

‘How do you feel?’ I asked.

‘Excited,’ he said.

‘How do you know you are excited?’

‘Because my heart is pounding like a blacksmith at the anvil,’ he said.

I leaned towards him and listened.  I could not hear his heart at all.  I smiled in relief.

‘Is your heart beating as hard as mine?’ he asked.

I shook my head and gave as stern and unconcerned look as I could.  Godwin seemed impressed.

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The Lost King: Resistance is the first in a series of books about Edgar Atheling and his resistance to the Norman Conquest.  It is available from all e-book outlets.  The third book in the series will be published this summer.

‘We’re going to fight the Normans.’ #SampleSunday

English: Harold Godwinson falls at Hastings. H...

English: Harold Godwinson falls at Hastings. Harold was struck in the eye with an arrow (left), slain by a mounted Norman knight (right) or both. (Photo credit: Wikipedia)

The next morning as I was finishing my breakfast, Oswald entered the room and announced that I would not be needed at the meeting of the Witan and could spend the day as I chose.  But he said that he would accompany me.

‘I will be your second hound,’ he said, stroking Rip’s head.

We wandered down to the river and began to stroll along the bank.  The morning mist was still heavy and every so often we would lose all sight of anything other than the closest bushes and trees.  Oswald said nothing although I heard him grunt with pleasure occasionally.  Perhaps it was hard being a warrior, I thought, and he liked this chance just to walk and enjoy the morning.

Finally, I plucked up the courage to ask him what was intriguing me.

‘Yesterday I had a dozen guards when I went down to the river.  Today I only have you.  Why has there been this change?’

‘Yesterday there was much doubt about the motives of Edwin and Morcar,’ said Oswald.  ‘Today there is less.  Or perhaps the wise ones choose to cloak their doubts.  Besides,’ and here he smiled broadly, ‘I am not alone.’  He gestured to the hill to our left.  I peered and could make out some five or six warriors with lurchers upon leashes.

‘There’s only six,’ I said.

‘Half the fear, half the men.’

I picked up a stick and began to swing it through the air, slashing at thistles and grass.  ‘But why should we fear Edwin and Morcar?’ I asked.  ‘They are Englishmen and should be loyal.’

‘There are many who question the slowness with which they journeyed south to join King Harold for battle.  Perhaps if their armies had been with him then he would still be alive.’

I fell silent at these words.  If only he were still alive.  I thought less about the earls’ treachery and more about how much I missed him.

‘If he was alive then you wouldn’t have to guard me,’ I said.  ‘I wouldn’t be important at all.’

Oswald stopped and turned towards me.  ‘And would you prefer that?’ he asked.

‘Of course,’ I said.  ‘Of course I would.’

He ruffled my hair.

We walked in silence for a little while.

Then I said,  ‘And would you prefer that?’

Oswald laughed.  ‘You are wise for your years.  How should a warrior answer that and stay safe?  Which answer would you prefer?  That I am loyal to you the King of England or more loyal to Harold who I know you loved?’

I did not answer for a moment.  Then I swung at a particularly large thistle.  ‘I would prefer that you told me the truth.’

Oswald placed his hand upon my shoulder.  ‘Then I shall do so,’ he said.  ‘I would prefer that Harold was still alive for he was a great and noble man.  If he was alive the Norman Duke would be food for battlefield crows instead of the threat he is now.  If Harold was still king then you wouldn‘t be called to a task which shouldn’t be thrust upon one of your years.’

We gazed at each other for a moment.  I felt a sudden liking for Oswald.

 

We got back an hour or so after noon and at once noticed a change.  People seemed on edge and they moved more swiftly.  I caught the sense of this and my stomach swooped.  One of the older warriors hurried towards Oswald and spoke quickly in his ear.  My fingers gripped the fur on Rip’s neck as I watched them, waiting for what would happen next.  Oswald turned to me.

‘I think we should take you to the Witan,’ he said.

I hurried after the two men.  Four guards were at the door, swords unsheathed.  They stood aside for us and we entered the gloom of the hall.  A few men nearby looked up at me but most continued to stare at the Archbishop and a few of the senior counselmen.

‘Take your place, Edgar,’ Oswald said quietly.

I slipped across the hall and onto the throne.  Stigand glanced at me for a moment but without pausing in his speech.

‘If we are to take this action,’ he continued, ‘then every one of us must be in full agreement.’  His eyes swept across the hall.  No one spoke and no one moved.

He remained silent for a long moment and when he spoke again his words were slow yet sure.

‘The army will gather at dawn two days hence and march out to meet the invaders at Wallingford.’

Again there was a silence.  Then one of the counsellors began to beat upon the table with his fist.  Another took up the rhythm and then another and then two more.  In a moment the whole hall was beating out the time and a low growl rose from out their throats.  The hairs on the back of my neck rose up.  We were going to fight the Normans.

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This extract is from ‘The Lost King: Resistance.’  It is the first novel in my series about Edgar Atheling, last native King of England.  It is available from all e-book outlets.

Guest post for Harvey Black

Harvey Black has asked me to do a guest post on his blog.  I was delighted at this invitation.

I have written about my approach to writing about war.  As always, I learned a little more about my own writing by taking a look at my work through a different prism.

Harvey’s own field is more recent than mine, by a thousand years.  He writes about World War 2 and the Cold War.

Please take a look at my contribution and the rest of Harvey’s blog at:

http://harveyblackauthor.org/

 

Outcasts Part 12 #SampleSunday #HistNov

Balian of Ibelin turned to his comrade.  ‘Jerome, send for my sergeants, I’ll knight those first.  And then Bernard, go find me such of your fellow citizens as you think will make good leaders.’

But there are no nobles left,’ said Eraclius.  ‘Only their children.  Perhaps twenty of them.’

Balian held Eraclius’ gaze, considering.

‘Jerome,’ he said, ‘I want you to knight every son of a noble old enough to bear arms in battle.’  He paused.

‘And I will knight any commoner that Sir Bernard recommends to me.’

He turned to Bernard.  ‘As many as possible, but only men who others will follow.’

Eraclius held out his hand to stay Bernard.

‘My lord Balian,’ he said.  ‘I do not think this is wise.’

‘Why not?  You just said we have need of knights.  How else will we get them?  Can the skeletons of Hattin be made to fight again?’

Eraclius crossed himself at these words.

‘No indeed, my lord,’ he said.  ‘But neither can knights be conjured out of rough-hewn men.’

Balian’s eyes narrowed and it looked for a moment as if he would strike the archbishop.

Eraclius flinched but maintained his ground.  ‘What do you think, Jerome?’

Jerome licked his lips and glanced up at the walls of the city which stood empty and unmanned.

‘I have never heard of such a thing,’ he said.  ‘But I have never been in a situation such as this.’

He paused.  ‘What I do know is that whoever Balian chooses to knight is a knight.  That cannot be gainsaid and cannot be undone.’

Eraclius glared at Jerome and shook his head.  ‘So be it,’ he said.  ‘If Christ could make fishermen disciples then maybe Balian can make peasants knights.’

He raised his hand for a moment as if about to cross himself at the impiety of his own words then he thought better of it and blessed Balian instead.

Jerome hurried off followed by Bernard.

Balian turned to John and Simon.  ‘From your speech you are English?

They nodded.

‘I can make use of another gift from England,’ he said.

He glanced across the square to where one of his sergeants was watching the handing out of weapons.  He gestured towards the man and he hurried over.

He was a tall man with a mass of golden hair like the mane of a lion.  He would have looked a mighty warrior save for one thing.  His right hand had been severed and was now a stump.

Balian drew his sword and touched him on the shoulder.

‘You’re Sir William Esson now,’ he said.

Esson held up his stump.  ‘Jerome said you were doing this, lord.  But how can I be a knight with only one hand?’

‘One hand is better than none,’ Balian said.  ‘And you’ve got a sharp mind and a tongue.  A tongue which speaks good Arabic.’

Esson nodded.

‘I want you to get the treasure which Henry of England gave to the city as penance for his slaying of Archbishop Becket.  If the priests are reluctant to let it go don’t hesitate to show them your swords.’

Esson smiled.

‘Once night has fallen take the treasure and go to the Saracen lines.  Buy as many weapons as you can from them.  You’ll find plenty willing to sell if the price is right.  Don’t stint.  We need weapons not treasure.’

‘Gladly, lord, but I am limited with one hand.’

‘Take this man with you, Simon Ferrier.  He’s English so I’m sure his King would approve of his actions.  He’ll carry the treasure for you.’

‘Yes, my lord.’

Balian watched Esson and Simon disappear from the citadel before gesturing John to come closer.

He examined him for a while in silence.  ‘Tell me your name,’ he said at last, ‘and of your violent deed.’

‘I am called John Ferrier, lord.’  He looked at the ground.  ‘Our priest, Father William, taught me my letters; I was grateful to him.  Then I met his sister and started to court her.’  He paused, struggling to voice the words which clawed at his throat but would not come out.

Finally he muttered, ‘I found out William was sleeping with her.  I became mad with fury and attacked him.’  He fell silent.

Balian held John’s gaze in his.  There was no censure in his eyes.  ‘And what did you do to this priest?’ he asked.

‘I smashed his face and broke some ribs and his arm.

Balian whistled.  ‘That must have been some fury.’  He straightened up and spoke sternly.  ‘Priests should not lay with their sisters.  I for one deem your fury to be a rightful one.’

John blinked.  Nobody had ever said this.

Balian turned towards Eraclius.  ‘Be wary of Sir John, my dear Archbishop.  He has no love for priests who break their vows and sleep with women.’

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‘Outcasts’ is the first novel in my Crusades series.  It is available world-wide from all ebook retailers. 

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Outcasts: The Knighting of the Commoners #SampleSunday #HistNov

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At Agnes’s insistence, John and Simon accompanied Bernard to the citadel.  They walked in silence, Simon still angry, Bernard fearful, John trying to quell the voices which rained down insults inside his head.

The citadel was crammed with men: Franks, Armenians, Syrians and Jews.  To one side was a pile of swords, spears and cudgels.  A line of men received weapons from one of Balian’s sergeants before shuffling to where a churchman stood, his hand held high in blessing.

Bernard turned his head away.  He had glimpsed Balian of Ibelin in a corner of the citadel talking with a veiled woman and half a dozen children.

At that moment the gate of the citadel was flung open.  To the astonishment of the crowd a dozen Saracen horsemen rode in followed by four men carrying a litter.  Balian kissed the woman goodbye and helped her into the litter.  The bearers made swiftly for the gate, followed by the children and last, the Saracen escort.

‘What’s happening?’ Simon asked.  ‘Where are they taking that woman?’

‘She is no ordinary woman,’ said Bernard.  ‘She is the wife of Balian.  More to the point she is grand-niece of the Emperor of Byzantium, as Saladin well knows.  Saladin has no wish to antagonise the Empire.  Maria Comnena could dance naked through the Saracen army and none would dare to look upon her.’

‘Somebody is looking at you though,’ John said.

Balian’s comrade, Jerome Sospel, was beckoning to them.

Bernard turned a worried gaze upon his friends and gestured them to come with him.

As they approached they saw Balian force his gaze from the gate where his wife and family had just departed and turn instead to examine the walls of the city.

Jerome placed his hand upon Balian’s shoulder for a moment, the briefest of moments.  Then he turned to the three friends as they approached.  ‘Bernard Montjoy,’ he said.  His voice pretended surprise.

Balian turned at his friend’s words and stared at the three men.

Bernard flung himself upon the ground, arms prostrate. ‘My lord, Balian’ he pleaded.  ‘You summoned me.’

Balian kicked him in the side. ‘Get up, Montjoy’ he said.  ‘Stop making a fool of yourself and of me.’

Bernard rose, dusting himself down, and stood abjectly, his head to one side.  ‘Mercy, Lord, upon your former servant,’ he pleaded.

Balian considered Bernard.  ‘I seem to remember that I once ordered a whipping for your insolence.  I have no need to repeat it now. I do, however, have need of you.  In your youth you were a good soldier; a sergeant, I recall.’

Bernard nodded.

‘I have need of every man who can bear a weapon.’  Balian put his hand upon Bernard’s shoulder.  ‘Most of the citizens will be good only to stop a Saracen arrow.  It is men like you who must make a fight.’

Bernard swallowed.  ‘I have a family, my lord.  A wife and two children.’

‘Then even more reason to fight.  If we hold on long enough then succour may come from the west.  And if it doesn’t arrive, yet we fight bravely, Saladin may agree to honourable terms.’

He gave a shrewd look at the Ferriers.  ‘Are these family?’

‘Friends, my lord.’

‘Can you fight, friends of Bernard?’

‘Just give me a weapon,’ said Simon.

John did not speak.  Balian stared into his eyes.  ‘Will you fight for the City?’

‘I am a pilgrim,’ answered John.  ‘I am a wrathful man.  My penance for an act of violence was to come to Jerusalem and never harm another.’

Balian turned to his comrade.  ‘What a delicious irony, Jerome,’ he said.  ‘The peaceable are lining up for weapons and this wrathful, violent man has sworn never to fight again.’

‘Perhaps he can be persuaded,’ Jerome said.

‘I can absolve him of his oath,’ said the Archbishop.  ‘Much good it will do though.’

Balian turned to him sharply.  ‘What do you mean?’

‘These are just common men,’ said Eraclius.  ‘We need knights to win battles.’

Jerome nodded.

‘You think this too?’ Balian asked.

‘Yes, my lord,’ Jerome said.  ‘The people may be brave but they need knights to command them.  Only knights will be able to inspire them.’

Balian’s shoulders slumped.  Jerome’s words confirmed the enormity of the task he had taken on.  Then he straightened.  His lips closed as tight as a scar.

‘You three, on your knees,’ he cried.

Terrified, Bernard, John and Simon scrambled to obey.

Balian drew his sword, making them flinch.  He touched them on their shoulders.  ‘Arise, Sir Knights,’ he said.

Astonished, the three men climbed to their feet.  Simon looked ecstatic, Bernard full of doubt.  John looked mortified.

‘There,’ Balian said.  ‘Now we have three more knights, which makes seven in the whole city.  It’s a start.’

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A Modest Proposal for a new calendar

In the last dozen years we have lived through two apocalyptic date.  The first was in the year 2000 when the world was rumoured to be at risk from something or other which I now forget.  The second was 2012 when some people asserted that the world would come to an end because a Mayan calendar had run out of dates or a rogue, invisible planet would crash into Pimlico, Des Moines or Nosy Varika.

Much of this nonsense is because one of the most common of the world’s timeline is based on the supposed date of Jesus Christ.  Every one agrees that the date is nonsense and, because it is so nonsensical there was massive confusion about when the second millennium would actually start.  If the first year of the Common Era, (it was called AD in my youth) was Year 1 then the new millennium did not actually start until 2001 which made the dire predictions of the end of the world in the year 2000 both hysterical and un-mathematical.

I also wonder if the latest scare date of 21st December 2012 had anything to do with its numerical equivalents 12.21.12 in the USA or 21.12.12 in my neck of the woods.  Such dreadful symmetry.

As someone keen on history I would like to propose a new calendar.  Not one based on a story in the bible but one which will pay tribute to all of humanity.  I propose a calendar which will start with the dawn of civilisation.  Even this is tricky as there is no firm agreement when civilisation started.

So, on a whim, I’ve plumped for 3,500 years BCE.  This is when several civilisations started across the globe, from China, the Indus Valley, through Mesopotamia, Egypt and the Americas.  I’ve also done it to keep the maths simple.

The benefits of this are manifold.  My new calendar is not linked to western civilisation nor to a religion.  It gets rid of the complications of counting backwards from the present year 1 for years BCE.  Best of all it puts modern times into the long sweep of history.

Here are some familiar dates in the new calendar.

 

 

1

200

400

500

800

875

1000

1200

1500

1700

1900

1950

2000

2320

2620

2724

2747

2755

2950

2991

3010

3068

3169

3300

3327

3279

3298

3400

3456

3514

3726

3976

4000

4052

4070

4122

4250

4300

4371

4411

4476

4501

4566

4599

4611

4687

4727

4799

4810

4825

4847

4953

4992

5001

5026

5080

5088

5116

5120

5142

5151

5196

5220

5276

5289

5305

5351

5361

5370

5389

5414

5445

5463

5469

5513

Possible start of Egyptian calendar

Hakra phase of Indus Valley civilisation

First Dynasty in Egypt

Sumerian cuneiform writing

Knossos in Crete is a city of 80,000 inhabitents

Khufu completes the Great Pyramid

Mammoth becomes extinct

Stonehenge complete

The horse is domesticated

First alphabets created

Shang Dynasty in China

Hittite Empire dominant force in area

Rig Veda written

End of the Hittite Empire

Iliad and Odyssey written

First Olympic Games held

Rome said to be founded

Tiglath-Pileser III begins rise of Assyrian Empire

Foundation of Persian Empire by Cyrus the Great

Rome becomes a Republic

Greek city states defeat Persia at Marathon

Construction of the Parthenon in Athens

Alexander the Great defeats King of Persia

Start of construction of Great Pyramid of Cholula

Ashoka the Great becomes Emperor

Great Wall of China begun

Hannibal defeated by Scipio Africanus

Chola Dynasty rises to prominence in South India

Julius Caesar murdered

Death of Emperor Augustus

Rise of the Sassanian Empire in Persia

End of the Western Roman Empire

Franks under Clovis defeat the Visigoths

Eastern Roman Empire (Byzantium) reconquers Italy

Birth of Mohammad

Mohammad moves from Mecca to Medina. Start of Islamic Calendar

Beginning of Abbasid Caliphate

Charlemagne crowned Holy Roman Emperor

Alfred the Great becomes King of Wessex

Rollo founds Normandy

Basil II becomes Emperor of Byzantium

Leif Ericson lands in Canada

The Battle of Hastings

First Crusade. Jerusalem is captured from the Muslims

University of Oxford founded

Saladin recaptures Jerusalem

Genghis Khan dies

Ottoman Empire founded

Dante publishes The Divine Comedy

Aztecs found city of Tenochtitlan

Black Death in Europe

Fall of Constantinople to the Ottoman Turks

Christopher Columbus reached the New World

Michelangelo begins sculpting David

Foundation of Mughal Empire

Sir Francis Drake first man to lead expedition round the globe

The Spanish Armada defeated

Shakespeare dies

Mayflower arrives in America

Tasman sights New Zealand

End of English Civil War

Peter the Great sole Tsar in Russia

The South Sea Bubble

American Declaration of Independence

The French Revolution starts

Napoleon becomes Emperor of the French

Great Exhibition in London

Start of American Civil War

Death of Charles Dickens

Edison tests his first light bulb

Start of World War 1

End of World War 2

The Beatles have their first hit record

Man lands on the Moon

This year.  Happy New 5513

 

I can’t guarantee the accuracy of the dates or, sadly, my arithmetic.  But I had fun doing it and it did make me think differently about history and time.

Christmas 1066. The Lost King: Resistance. #SampleSunday #HistNov

Resistance.2012.coverOn Christmas morning Oswald woke me early and beckoned me to the window.  I glanced outside.  The sky was as grey as iron and as I watched snowflakes began to swirl.  By the time I got my clothes on the snow was layering the ground and the rooftops.  An unholy silence seemed to settle on the town.  Even the distant barks of dogs were muffled and no birds flew.  Godwin and I stared out at the cold whiteness.  Normally, I would have flung myself into the snow but this morning my heart was as heavy as a rock and I lingered mournfully in the doorway.  Godwin stood beside me, sharing my silence and gloom.

‘Come on lads,’ cried Oswald.  ‘Duke William will have me thrown in the river if you are late.’

Serving women came and sighed at the sight of me.  They made me strip my clothes off and adorn myself in fine linens and embroidered surcoat.  Lastly they wrapped a costly cloak around my shoulders.  Then one of my Norman guards came and fastened a sword around my waist.  I waited until he had gone before I pulled it from its scabbard.  It was blunt.

Oswald looked me up and down.  He did not say a word and I could not tell if he was pleased with me or not.  It was not like him to be so silent.  Then he nodded.  ‘Come on,’ he said.  ‘It is a long ride to the Abbey.’

We followed him out into the snow.  I was delighted to see that Leofwine, one of my favourite Housecarls, was waiting outside, holding the reins of my pony.  He helped me into the saddle and then we trotted along the river.  Waiting on the banks were the rest of my twenty Housecarls and with them a further forty Norman horseman.

‘You have a fine bodyguard,’ said Godwin, his eyes gleaming.

I nodded.  Our spirits were lifted by the sight of the warriors.

Slowly we trudged through the still sleeping streets.  The snow danced before our eyes like elf spirits in the woods.  Time seemed to have no sway and I could not tell whether we spent an hour or many hours in the saddle.

At length, up ahead, we saw the huge bulk of Westminster Abbey appear through the snow.  As we got closer, I realised that all the area surrounding it was crowded with Norman soldiers.  They were fully armed and looked watchful and nervous.  A few local men waited in the doorways of their homes, but there was no sight of their women or children.

We dismounted and entered the vastness of the Abbey.  It was like the mightiest hall of a king but twenty times larger. Huge torches flared upon the walls casting dismal shadows.  It looked as though the Abbey was full of giant ghosts, their bodies shifting and wavering in the cold draught.  I knew a spell against ghosts and was relieved that I could chant it if I had to.  But I guessed that the heavy smell of incense would banish any of the dead.  I had never liked the smell of incense and here there was so much that it clogged my nostrils and made my throat feel like wool.  The priests who swung the incense salvers droned out a miserable dirge all the while.  Perhaps they hated the smell as well.

I glanced up at the roof stretching far overhead.   The empty space made me feel naked and afraid and I turned my eyes back to the hall.  Half of it was empty but nearer the altar were about a hundred men and women, English and Norman.

‘We are not allowed to go any nearer,’ Oswald whispered to me.  ‘But we will be waiting here for you, never fear.’

Close to the altar was a small huddle of men, cloaked against the cold.  I was ushered up to join them.  Most were Normans, although I recognised only Bishop Odo and William fitz Osbern, a close friend of the Duke’s and his steward.

Also there was the traitor Archbishop Stigand, who gave me a winning smile.  I stared back at him as though he was a stranger.  Next to him was Earl Edwin who looked even more pale and drawn than previously.  And to my delight, there was his brother Morcar who gestured me over and made room for me to sit next to him.  My Norman guards seemed unhappy with this but did not wish to countermand the earl so contented themselves with crowding close in the bench behind me.

‘How are things with you, Edgar?’ asked Morcar.

I shrugged.  ‘I have been kept in a fine house.  My bodyguard Oswald has been allowed to stay with me and his son Godwin who is my friend.’  I turned and pointed them out to him.

‘And have you been treated well?’

‘Well enough.  They give me fine food and I drink wine instead of ale.  But I’m not allowed to go out without ten thousand Norman guards following me.’

Morcar chuckled.  ‘It is the same with me.  I am treated like the most honoured of guests but feel like a prisoner.  I am allowed to see no Englishmen at all.  Only Englishwomen.’

‘That must be really boring,’ I said.  Morcar gave a strange smile but did not respond.

‘And what about your brother?’ I asked.  ‘Do you see him?’

Morcar shook his head.  ‘This is the first time that I have seen him since we got to London.  He has been lodged at Winchester and I at Barking with Duke William.’

I grinned to myself.  It would upset Edwin that the Duke had sent him far away while keeping his younger brother close by him.  Either William preferred Morcar’s company, which was understandable, or considered him more of a threat.  Either way, Edwin would be angered.

A bellowing horn sounded in the Abbey and the Normans rose to their feet.  After a little moment Morcar did so as well and signed me to do the same.

All at once the chatter of the congregation ceased and the last dirge of the priests echoed against the walls and was snuffed out.  I turned and saw Archbishop Ealdred of York pacing slowly up the aisle and behind him, in full chain mail and a vast red cloak, Duke William.

At length they reached the altar and began a very long ceremony, some in Latin, a little in English but most in French.  I could speak French and followed it, but in the end I got bored.  All at once I thought of my dog Rip.  I felt terrible.  I had not seen him since the morning we left London to seek battle with the Normans.  That was nearly three weeks ago.  He must be missing me terribly.  I would have to seek permission from the Duke to go to find him.

At that point I noticed that there was a lull in the ceremony.  Then I saw a Norman priest walk up the aisle bearing a cushion with old King Edward’s crown upon it.  I narrowed my eyes.  There was only one person who should be wearing that crown, I thought.

The priest approached the archbishop who held the crown aloft above William’s head.  ‘People of England,’ he cried in a loud voice.  ‘Do you give consent that William should be crowned your king, lawful and anointed in the name of the saviour?’

I shook my head.  Only the day before, Oswald had told me that Duke William had decided upon this trick in order to claim that the people of England really did support him.  Real kings of England had not needed to seek this consent.  Harold had not and neither had I.

‘We consent,’ said the English gathered nearby.  I did not.

Then a Norman bishop stepped forward and cried out: ‘Nobles and warriors of Normandy.  Do you consent that William be crowned King of England and the English?’

A huge baying came from all of the Normans crowded in the Abbey.  The Abbey was so vast and empty that the cry seemed to take on a life of its own, crashing against one wall and back again as though a huge army was camped within it.

At that exact moment, the doors of the Abbey crashed open.  I turned in alarm.  Armed men rushed into the Abbey crying loud.  Some held drawn swords and some had burning torches.

‘Harold,’ I cried.  ‘Harold has come.

But it was not Harold.  These were Norman soldiers.  They hurtled up the aisle, swords waving, clamouring out William’s name.

Then, above the noise, we heard the Duke’s voice.  ‘Silence,’ he cried.  His voice was so loud that it carried far above the noise of the soldiers.  ‘Why have you entered this holy place with swords drawn?’

The Norman soldiers looked about them in confusion.

‘The fools think that the Bastard was in danger,’ said Morcar.  ‘They must have thought that the acclamation was some attack upon him.’  He looked around, thoughtfully.  ‘They must be as nervous as she-cats.’

At that moment, thick smoke began to billow into the Abbey.  William fitz Osbern ran down to the doorway and glanced out.  He came charging back up the aisle.  ‘Our bloody troops have set the nearby houses on fire,’ he cried.

Then he felled the nearest of the Norman soldiers with his fist.

‘I will not have this panic,’ cried William.  His face was scarlet with rage.  ‘Quench the fires.’

He glared at Archbishop Ealdred.  The old man did not respond for a moment and fitz Osbern pushed him forward.  He shook his head and placed the crown upon William’s head.

William jammed the crown further down upon his forehead and then stormed off to a side door.  He had only taken half a dozen strides when he turned and hurried back.  He grasped me by the shoulder.  ‘Come,’ he cried, ‘the whole of the Abbey may be engulfed.’

In a moment we were outside.  William stopped and stared at the flames which were fast destroying the nearby houses.  Screams of terror and pain cut through the winter day.  ‘I had not wanted my coronation to end like this,’ he said.  He stared at the burning houses.  ‘What a terrible way to die,’ he said.

I stared back at him, surprised at his words.

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The first two books of the Lost King series are available at all ebook outlets priced $3.00, £1.95, €2.68CDN$ 2.99  or thereabouts.

The third book, Warrior, will be available in 2013.

You may also want to look at my other novels. ‘Artful’ tells the adventures of the Dodger in Australia where he has been transported and London. ‘Outcasts’ is about the ordinary men who were knighted by Balian of Ibelin to defend Jerusalem against Saladin.

May I wish all readers of this blog a happy holiday season.

Part 10 of ‘Outcasts’. #SampleSunday #HistNov

CHAPTER 5

BALIAN OF IBELIN

Jerusalem

Fear flooded the city like a plague.  It swept down from the Church and through the streets to the citadel.  The people of the city hurried towards the high battlements, desperate to glimpse what they were terrified to see.  Bernard, John and Simon shouldered their way into the crowd and were carried along to the walls.

There were no soldiers left in the city anymore so there was no challenge to them as they climbed the steps to the battlements.

The sun was drawing close to the horizon, painting gold the plain beyond the city.  A vast army, swollen to fifty thousand warriors, was marching into place.  Even as they looked, the last formations hurried to close the gap remaining between them.

The city was surrounded.

‘Perhaps our leaders will attempt another parlay?’ John said.

‘It did no good last time and it will do no good now,’ Bernard answered.  ‘The moment those fools refused to surrender, Saladin swore he would kill every Christian.’  He sighed.  ‘Just as the first Crusaders killed every Muslim when they took the city.’

‘So we must put our faith in Lord Christ.’

Bernard shook his head, wearily.  ‘Christ’s representative Archbishop Eraclius leads us now,’ he said.  ‘So if preaching and whoring are needed to defend a city we have just the man to lead us to victory.’

They gazed out at the army arrayed below them.  Most were infantry but to the rear trotted legions of horsemen, their spears glittering in the light of the failing sun.

But what caught their eyes lay directly ahead.  Scores of catapults and mangonels were already in place, loaded with huge stones.

‘Surely they cannot conquer these walls?’ said John.  ‘Not even with those machines.’

‘The walls might be strong,’ said Bernard, ‘but there are no soldiers left to man them.’

Simon pointed.  A small group of horsemen trotted forward from the foremost Saracen lines.

‘Horsemen,’ he said.  ‘Five of them.’

Intrigued, the three men hurried down the staircase to the gate.  They waited with the crowd until a postern door slid open and the horsemen entered the city.

The leader of the group took off his helmet to reveal the lined and haggard face of an elderly warrior.

‘Balian of Ibelin,’ Bernard said.  He turned a worried face towards the Ferriers.

‘What’s wrong?’ John asked.

‘In my youth I was one of Balian’s sergeants.  When he married Queen Maria Comnena I made some jest about him marrying for a crown.  I received a flogging and my dismissal.’

‘What has he come here for?’ said Simon.

‘His wife,’ said Bernard.  ‘She’s here in the city.  I was wrong you see.  Balian married for love.’

The man who stood by Balian was a tall man of about the same age.  Where Balian looked worried he seemed calm and relaxed.  He gazed around at the city as if remembering good times he had experienced here.  He raked his fingers through his hair and then stopped.  He had noticed them watching him and a broad grin of recognition spread over his face at the sight of Bernard.

‘You know him?’ John asked.

Bernard nodded.  ‘Jerome Sospel.  Balian’s best friend and lieutenant.’

News of the horsemen had spread and a committee of churchmen pushed their way through the crowd.  They were led by Archbishop Eraclius who rushed to embrace Balian.

‘Praise God,’ he said.  ‘You have been sent to save the city.’

Balian shook his head.  ‘No.  I have come for my wife and children.  Saladin gave me free passage to collect them.  I swore an oath to stay in the city for one day only and not to take arms against him.’

A fierce cry of anguish rose from the populace at these words.  Balian glanced around at the sound but clamped his jaw tight, determined to ignore it.

‘But that was an oath to an infidel,’ said Eraclius.  He stepped closer as though about to whisper but he made his voice loud enough to carry across the crowd.  ‘It is in my power to absolve you of your oath to the Saracen.’

Balian gave him an angry glare.  ‘I have come for my wife.  Where is she?’

Eraclius peered at Balian, his mind working swiftly.  ‘She is in the palace.  Go to her.  Be joyous in your reunion.  I shall come to you there later.’

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The next morning the people of the city were overjoyed to hear that Eraclius had absolved Balian of Ibelin from his oath to Saladin.  Balian was now free to take charge of the city’s defence.

‘What do you think of this news?’ John asked Bernard.

‘I don’t know.’  Bernard fell silent and shook his head.  ‘Jerusalem is my home.  Our delegates were mad when they refused Saladin’s terms; it condemned the city to destruction.’

He glanced across at Agnes who was singing quietly to their daughter.  ‘I feared for my family,’ he continued.  ‘But with Balian here…’

‘You think there may be a chance?’

Bernard shrugged.

Simon strode into the inn, his face shining with excitement.

‘Balian has asked for every man to join him in defence of the city,’ he said.  He gave a playful punch to John’s shoulder.  ‘It will be a glorious battle.’

John’s heart sank.  This was what he had dreaded to hear.

‘I came to Jerusalem to be a pilgrim,’ he said.  ‘I did not come to be a soldier.’

Simon stared at him in astonishment.  ‘To be a pilgrim is a luxury at a time like this.  The infidel is beating upon the gate.’

‘I will not kill my fellow man.’

Simon stared at him.  ‘A Saracen is not a fellow man.  He is an infidel, damned for all eternity.  That is what the church teaches us.’

‘I do not believe it.’

Simon opened his mouth to reply but Bernard raised his hand to silence him.  ‘Hush, both of you.  We should not war amongst ourselves.’

‘I do not want a war,’ John said.  ‘With Simon or with the Saracens.’

‘You may not want a war,’ Simon said.  ‘But what if the other man wants one?  What if the Saracen is determined to have one?’

Bernard turned towards John.  ‘No one wants to fight, no one wants to kill.  And no one here wants to make you take up arms against your will.’

‘He may have sworn to be a pilgrim,’ said Simon angrily, ‘but he never swore to lie supine before God’s enemies.’

John looked up, his blood swirling with rage at the insult.  He checked himself.  It was this rage that had made him come on a pilgrimage, this rage which he had to do penance for, this rage which he had sworn to master, for Christ’s sake and for his own.

‘Shall I fight the infidel alone, cousin?’ Simon asked in a cold voice.  ‘Or shall I fight with you by my side?’

John said nothing.

Simon’s face quivered with anger.  He strode off but before he could reach it the door was flung open.

A soldier looked around.  ‘Is Bernard Montjoy here?’

Bernard looked at the floor for a long moment.  Then he raised his hand.

‘Lord Balian wants you,’ said the soldier.

‘No,’ cried Agnes.

‘He commands it,’ the soldier said.  ‘He demands it.’

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‘Outcasts’ Book 1 of my Crusades series, will be published this month.

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Talking with Elizabeth Chadwick. #HistNov

Today, I’m delighted to be talking with Elizabeth Chadwick.  Elizabeth is the author of novels which bring to life the turbulent times and fascinating personalities of the Middle Ages.

Martin: Which authors have had the greatest influence upon you?

Eizabeth: I have always been a voracious reader. Influences are so numerous and subconscious that I wouldn’t be able to name most of them. However, a few do stand out for specific reasons. I became interested in medieval history as a subject for fiction in my teens. I discovered Roberta Gellis and thought her work was amazing. She wrote on the line between straight historical fiction and historical romance. Her research was very detailed – she read the primary sources and as a result her characters were of their time and not modern people in fancy dress. Her storylines were entertaining and often edge of the seat and her characters so believable that you felt as if they were standing in the room with you. She had one particular hero called Ian de Vipont who was the romance hero cliché of being tall dark and handsome. In a less skilled writer’s hands he could have been made of cardboard but Gellis turned him into a living breathing three-dimensional character. I learned from Roberta Gellis that it was possible to write romantic historical stories and remain true to the period.

Sharon Kay Penman, now a dear friend, was also one of my influences. Her contribution was to show me that it was also possible to write about real people and tell their story in an entertaining way without warping history.

My other main influence was Dorothy Dunnett. As well as the amazing research and the fabulous characters, Dunnett’s use of language blew me away. She’s in a league of her own. I may never be able to write like Dorothy Dunnett, but I always feel that reading her work helps me to raise my game. Fortunately although I am inspired by other authors, I don’t tend to pick up their voices when it comes to my own writing.

One of the joys of being an historical novelist is that you can range over space and time.  What made you choose the Medieval period for your novels?

It’s a long story but I’ll give you the short version! The first reason is that I was inspired at junior school by a particularly excellent history teacher who brought the subject to life in the classroom. I only had her for one year though and that year coincided with medieval study, so that gave the period an advantage.

Later in my teens I fell for a handsome knight in a children’s TV programme. I began writing what initially started out as a piece of fan fiction but quickly changed into my own tale.  I had to research the medieval period because I wanted the background to feel as real as possible. The more I researched the more interested I became and the more I want to write about those times. I have been studying for several decades now and the more I research the more I realise how much I don’t know, and the passion for the period continues. If I were to start writing about another time, the amount of research I would need to do to bring myself up to scratch would be phenomenal.

Some historical novelists are very strict about historical accuracy while others are willing to modify history to suit their novel.  Where do you stand on this?

Aha! The poisoned chalice question!  I’m one of the strict ones. I say if you need to modify history to suit the story then you’re actually not a good enough writer. A good writer will find a way that tells a terrific story without having to modify history. I add the big caveat that obviously we all have to use our imaginations and we can’t know everything. We are products of the 20th and 21st centuries and with the best will in the world we are coping with our own mindsets even while trying to put ourselves in theirs.

Part of the fun of writing for me is the challenge of finding a way round the knotty problem of telling a story when the history seems to be getting in the way. It’s like putting a puzzle together and usually once I’ve thought outside the box and reorganised the story pieces, I find something that’s a good fit, and it’s very rewarding. I think the more research you do in the background the easier it becomes to fit story and history together. You should never dump your historical research into a novel, but your research will inform how you write it and the more you research, the easier the writing and the story will become.

The other thing is that you are writing for a wide audience of readers who all have their own foibles and expectations to bring to the experience. Some will demand intense historical authenticity. Others are just in it for the story. The best thing to do is write for both types of readers. That way those who like their accuracy can relax and those who just want story can be on the edge of their seats and loving the ride.

Of course you can sometimes find the attempt to be authentic is a double edged sword.  I received a review of one of my novels where the reader said it was a fairy tale because they didn’t have side saddles in the 12th century.  But they did and I have primary source provenance.  It goes back to the author not being able to legislate for what the reader brings of themselves to the experience.

Are you someone who plans and plots your novels very carefully or do you follow where the pen takes you?

I write about real people these days so the basic route map is laid out for me. I know where I’m going, but I don’t always know the scenery until I write it, and sometimes there are digressions along the route. I do write a very detailed synopsis at the start of the project, but it is still more like ‘guidelines really’ to quote Captain Barbossa in Pirates of the Caribbean. I research as I write and sometimes the research will throw up something that means I need to digress from my initial synopsis – but that’s not a problem; it’s all part of the fun.

How do you research your novels? 

It’s a multistrand approach. I research the absolute need-to-know detail at the outset when I’m writing my synopsis and first three chapters. Then I continue to research while I’m writing the rest of the novel. I research the primary sources and from as many different angles as possible. When I was researching LADY OF THE ENGLISH, I looked at the chroniclers who were for the Empress Matilda and those who were against her and pro-King Stephen. This helped me get a rounded view of proceedings. I also research primary source social documents to get a handle on mindset and daily life.  I look at academic secondary sources both the political and the social. I use reference works of which I have an extensive library, and also the Internet.

I go to various locations involved in the novels where I take photographs, pick up the guidebooks and walk the grounds. Even if there’s not a lot left one still gets a sense of atmosphere. I re-enact with an early medieval society called Regia Anglorum. This too helps me get a feel for the period. It brings history out of the textbook and into 3-D and is a vitally important research tools far as I’m concerned.

More controversially I use the psychic. If one believes in it then it’s a hotwire to the past. If one doesn’t, then it’s a superb way of accessing otherwise hidden realms of imagination. I have the material vetted by a professor of medieval cultural history. I am told that it’s medieval mindset coming through, so wherever it comes from that’s good enough for me.  Striving to get the mindset right is one of the holy grails of historical fiction!

Which of your characters has surprised you most and why?

I think John Marshal in A PLACE BEYOND COURAGE. He was the father of my hero William Marshal in THE GREATEST KNIGHT and THE SCARLET LION and he had something of a bad reputation. He is famous for going back on his word when his son was a hostage and under threat of death. He is supposed to have said that his enemies could go ahead and hang the boy because he had the anvils and hammers to get better sons. I was curious as to what would make a father say this about his own child. What were the circumstances behind the story? What I discovered very much overturned the accepted history and showed me that John Marshal had been judged through modern eyes and not the mindset of his own period. When I went searching I found a very different story, and just had to tell it.

What would be a typical writing day for you?  Do you have set times, spaces, routines or rituals?

A typical writing day is a long one! It’s probably best if you ask me what is a typical writing week as days tend to vary. I work seven days a week most weeks of the year. I get up, have breakfast with my husband who is retired. Then I head to my office which is a converted bedroom. I log onto the Internet and check my e-mails and Twitter. I then head to Facebook and for my followers I post a research book of the day, a research fact of the day, and the opening line from my current work in progress. Then I’ll embark on a couple of hours work. During that time I will pop in and out of Facebook and Twitter to check my feeds and answer as necessary. I’ll take a lunch break of about three quarters of an hour during which I’ll read for pleasure. If it’s a day at home then I’m back at work for the afternoon.

Work doesn’t just involve writing a novel, it also involves things like this interview, which I’ve been working on for over an hour now. Replies to queries. Blog posts. More Facebook and Twitter interaction. I’m published in both the UK and the USA by different publishers and they’ll both want input from me. For example at the moment I am writing a new novel for my UK publisher having just handed in the previous one. That has been sent back to me for copyediting. Meanwhile my American publisher has also sent me a backlist novel for editing, so I have to fit this into my working day as well. I’ll stop to cook an evening meal and do more reading and chat to my husband. Then back to work until about 11:30 pm. After that I’ll unwind for an hour or so by watching a film or TV programme. Then to bed to read for a short while and lights out about 1.30.

On a non full working day, it’s the routine as mentioned above, but I’ll go out and do the grocery shop, go to the gym or see a friend for a couple of hours. Sometimes I walk the dogs with my husband. Quite often I have to go out and give talks. Next week for example I have to take an afternoon out to give a talk at a library on Tuesday, and then I’m away in London to give another talk on Thursday so that’s almost a full working day taken out. So it’s not all about writing a novel. It’s about all the peripherals going round the writing. It’s extreme multitasking!

What’s been your favourite moment in your writing career?

That’s hard to say. There have been quite a few highlights.  Perhaps I can list a few of them. All of them are experiences I would never have had if not for my writing.

1. Having THE WILD HUNT accepted for publication and then the novel going on to win an award which was presented to me by HRH the Prince of Wales at an event in London.

2. Going on (anarchic!) breakfast TV when THE CHAMPION was shortlisted for an award.

3. Having a reader write to me and say that he’d loved one of my novels and his only complaint was that it wasn’t nice to make a grown man cry on the train!

4. Having another reader write to me who is an usher at the House of Lords and inviting me to take a personal guided tour of the Houses of Parliament and House of Lords. What an experience that was!

5. Discovering William Marshal and his family. They have become a lifelong passion

6. Winning the Romantic Novelists Association award in 2011 for the best historical novel of the year with TO DEFY A KING

7. Having THE GREATEST KNIGHT become a New York Times and USA Today bestseller

If you were to give advice to someone thinking of writing a novel what would it be?

Don’t think, get on and do it. Write from the heart and write for the sheer pleasure of the words and story. The rest will follow. Make sure that you read voraciously and eclectically. This will help you find your own voice and will show you what’s out there. It will also help you develop your personal built in editor. Writing like flying improves with the number of bum on seat hours you undertake. It also improves with the amount of reading you do. I heard one very famous lady author of historical fiction say that reading ‘trashy novels’ would ruin your voice. That’s utter rubbish. One person’s ‘trashy novel’ is another person’s marvellous read. Just enjoy reading whatever you want and you find it will help you to write in the long term.

What is your next writing project?

I’m currently engaged in a long-term project to write three novels about Eleanor of Aquitaine. THE SUMMER QUEEN will be published next June and I’m busy working on the middle novel of the trilogy THE WINTER CROWN. As each novel takes me approximately 18 months to write, I am going to be busy for a while yet! I do have a couple of ideas for after that, but I’m not saying what!

Thanks very much for talking with me today, Elizabeth.  It’s been fascinating.

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To find out more about Elizabeth and her books please check out the following links:

My website www.elizabethchadwick.com

My main blog. 
http://livingthehistoryelizabethchadwick.blogspot.co.uk/

My Twitter name @chadwickauthor

Part 9 of my new Crusades novel. #SampleSunday #HistNov

CHAPTER 4  THE FIELD OF HATTIN

THE END OF THE ARMY

The Frankish nobles stared at the carnage.

The plain was covered with the corpses of men-at-arms.  The loss of foot-soldiers was to be expected, if not on this scale.  What horrified the nobles was that a thousand knights had also been slain.

King Guy glanced at the scatter of men close by.  They were overcome by thirst, wounds and despair.  They could fight no longer.

The sun tormented those left alive, especially the wounded.  Their groans carried far across the plain.  Only the carrion birds were not dismayed by the sound.  They circled patiently, waiting until the dying gave up the struggle and the battle-field grew still.

There was one strength still remaining to the Christians.  Raymond of Tripoli had maintained command of a few of his troops, a hundred in all, knights and foot-soldiers.

The King called across the heaps of dead, commanding him to attack the Saracen army.

Raymond looked across the field of dead; disbelieving, despairing.  His dislike of Guy was deep-seated.  He had long argued against his determination to force war upon Saladin.  But he never thought the man’s folly would lead to this.

He stared for a moment at Guy.  He turned and looked at Saladin’s army and then at his own pitiful remnant of men.  Then he laughed; a laugh of desperation and bitter scorn.

Raymond sheathed his sword and forced his men to harvest their courage and whatever weapons they could find.

‘Mount up,’ Raymond cried.  ‘Find a horse and mount up.  Even foot-soldiers, even if you’ve never ridden before, mount up.’

The Saracen host, thirty thousand warriors, was drawn up in a crescent in front of them.  Raymond took a deep breath and led his hundred men towards them.

The ground was strewn with Christian corpses.  His men turned their heads when they saw they were about to ride over stricken friends or comrades.  But Raymond increased the pace and the horsemen moved into a canter.  The two armies were close now and he cried out, summoning his men to their final hopeless charge.

He drew his sword and aimed it at the nearest emir.  But as he did so, with unbelievable skill, the Saracens veered away.  A gap opened up allowing the tiny force to ride through the army unmolested to safety.

On the other side of the battle-field Balian of Ibelin realised that all eyes were on the charge of his friend Count Raymond.  He seized this brief opportunity to lead his last four followers to safety.

The Saracen army reformed and came to a halt a furlong away from King Guy and the rest of the Frankish lords.

Two men, the leaders of the victorious army, walked their horses a dozen paces in front of their warriors and gazed upon their stricken foe.

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Saladin walked alone across the battle field.    Most of the nobility of the Kingdom had been captured, including King Guy.  Only Raymond’s force and four men led by Balian of Ibelin had escaped.

All around him lay the corpses of the army of Jerusalem, twenty thousand soldiers and knights, the entire defensive force of the Kingdom.

Saladin turned to the south, his eyes peering across the bleak hills.  Now, finally, he could unleash the storm upon Jerusalem.